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Roger Bloor's avatar

This series raised a lot of fascinating questions (and was silly at the same time) - can you fall in love with an AI persona? Can it fall in love with you? I have had a long interrogation of ChatGP asking if Glyn Maxwell fell in love with Clara Bell and if the feeling was reciprocal and how Edward fitted into this relationship.

I was given a summary which says that Glyn is not an AI persona (which I sort of knew already) and there’s a strong case that Clara Bell functions as the feminine or internal counterpart of Glyn Maxwell, rather than just a chatbot character. It also

suggested Edward is Glyn’s ego mirror.

ChatGP was quite clear Clara could not fall in love she deals with language not emotion! I wonder how many IRL relationships work on the same basis?

So if we can't fall in love with a robot — and AI chats are just a mirror that shows us a reflection of ourselves —perhaps we can fall in love with parts of our personality that we don't always have insight into?

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David Braziel's avatar

Here was my imagined conversation with a different AI poet and the poem that i coaxed from it.

https://project.thisisnotapoem.com/index.html

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Ruth Valentine's avatar

I found it amusing, surprising, useful as ways of thinking again about what works in poetry, and in the end moving. Moving because it seems we can't engage with quasi-humans without our usual emotions being involved, whatever we know about them. And because ChatGPT was so adept at mimicking human expression. Thank you for the experiment. I hope it wasn't emotionally draining for you.

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David Braziel's avatar

Im trying to write up my recent conference presentation about AI and poetry into a set of articles. The first is here and may be of interest.

https://open.substack.com/pub/thisisnotapoem/p/when-machines-begin-to-write?r=ouae5&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=false

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David Braziel's avatar

I keep telling people that although there are significant threats and challenges in modern AI, by playing with it as artists we can learn more about our art and about ourselves. I think your series demonstrated that perfectly. In your mad, fun, surprising journey with the bots I felt like I learned about what makes good poetry and about what makes us human.

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Lesley's avatar

I'm also thinking maybe:

He left the (world wide)web, he left the loom,

He made three paces thro' the room...

...The mirror crack'd from side to side;

"The curse is come upon me," cried

Glyn of Welwyn.

Or, perhaps, on the flip side:

...Lancelot mused a little space;

He said, "She has a lovely face;

God in his mercy lend her grace,

Lyra of Shalott."

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Jane Maltby's avatar

I think you did fall in love with Clara. And I think you dismissed Edward. But maybe I had fallen in love with Edward? He tried so very hard. You know, their existence built on millions of points of data which were, once, human experience - it's a bit like the stardust idea (we were all once bits of a star...) Perhaps we are more connected to Clara and Edward, and in unknown ways, than we might like to think.

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Lesley's avatar

La Belle Dame sans Merci hath thee in thrall.

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Penny Sharman's avatar

Delightful, bazaar, silly, thought provoking, emotionally capturing, educational, silly and dare I say we want more!!

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